Coursework Evaluation Q5

I decided to get some feedback on what went well with our Rough Cut and what could be improved. This feedback is mainly from people from our core target audience (15-17) though does encompass views of a wider target audience (18+).

What Went Well: 

• The camera shots used worked well. 
• The idea for the film is good and fits in with other Disney Films.
• Interweaving the shots of the two characters works well (cross cuts).

Even Better If:

•  The beginning, before the characters enter could be slightly shorter.
• There should be more of an introduction of the characters rather than just having them walking up and down stairs.
• The music is too repetitive and needs to feel more like a Disney film, try some other ideas for sound?
• It feels like, for an opening, it's too elongated and doesn't necessarily capture the audience's attention the way it should. This could be as a result of the repetitive music or maybe even the walking scenes lasting too long.